Monday, February 5, 2007

2/6 Descriptive Writing Assignment

This is the scene were all the “books” watch the city get bombed as they hold on for their life.

Descriptive words:

Gasping, clawed, bursting, shouting, sanity, ripped, tore, gritting, concussion, crushed, squeezing, and oblivion.

I think these words emphasize everything that ray was saying. Also they were dreadful words too, nothing like scratched, he used clawed. That is a much stronger and more frightening word to add to the mood. There were a lot of these strong words too, these are just scratching the surface compared to how many there were on the scene.

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